This is the official page for Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear stories.
Directory:
1. Summary of RHPB
2. Feedback
3. The Books
A. The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear
B. The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear 2: The Journey Begins
C. The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear 3: The Lost Crystal
D. The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear 4: The Tale Unfolds
E: The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear 5: The Final Battle
4. The All-In-One Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear
5. Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear(Beef66ars version)
A. Character descriptions(Under Construction)
6. Credits!
1. RHPB takes you on the most exciting, funny, mysterious, life-daring, action story of Club Penguin. With the Cast of CJuniour, the daring, smart, and charming leader of the crew, Starwarnate, CJ’s best friend and lover of Star Wars, Beef66ars, The stealthy dude that give CJ a hand here and there, Minigop, The strong guy for the Girls’ sake, Hershey8465, the lovable penguin that cares for CJ the most, and Mouse 9 9, CJ’s ex-girlfriend, and With the help of the one-of-a-kind Gary the Gadget Guy, Herbert will be blown to pieces.
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“The Tale of Charming and Beautiful Adventurer Penguins!” -Watex
“Just stunning!” -Me Am
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The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear
Written by Cjuniour
Cjuniour (Or ‘CJ’) shook himself as Gary the Gadget Guy, or ‘G’ tapped him on the shoulder. CJ had been on Club Penguin Island for almost a year now. He had been a secret agent after 30 days living there. CJ had been waiting for so long to do something special. He couldn’t imagine this day. CJ turned and was surprised it was G. “Gary!” CJ said. “Hello Cjuniour, or can I call you CJ?” G asked. “Sure! Why are you here?” CJ responded. “There is a special mission I want to assign you to.” CJ almost exploded. “Herbert the Polar Bear’s location had been discovered. We need your help to catch him.” G continued. CJ gave a big grin. “I’d love to!” CJ said. G led him to the gadget room, and gave him some items. “It appears Herbert has captured a helpless penguin, and I believe that Hershey8465 is your friend?” CJ smiled again. “Yes she is! I’ll leave now.” CJ said. “Be careful, he has gone to a secret area in the Dojo. There is a room you must find, and you need the Area-Finder 5000 to discover it.” G said. CJ nodded and started his journey. He began a journal of his adventure. ‘Day 1: Dear Journal, I am so excited to begin this journey. I have to travel to the Mountain to get to the Dojo.’ CJ checked his buggy list, and he saw 2 friends, Starwarnate and his girlfriend, Mouse 9 9. He found both of them and asked them to join him on his mission. Both accepted and they all continued their journey. “I wonder when we will get there,” Mouse 9 9 said as he hugged CJ.
When they reached the Mountain, CJ grabbed his grappling rope and threw it at the top of the mountain. It held on as they all went up. CJ grabbed the rope and put it away. Then, they went into the Dojo. No penguins were there, so he pulled out the Area-Finder 5000. He searched the room until he saw a invisible doorknob. He walked up to it and opened the door. There was a huge rock behind it. He put on the AF5000 and saw a invisible lever on the side of the wall. He pulled it and the rock went up, revealing a secret passageway. They went down and started hearing noises. They slowed to a stop, and CJ looked out the door. There was Herbert, building a strange machine. “I think it’s a big trash-can-thingy,” Whispered CJ. “It’s finished!” A voice shouted. CJ realized it as Herbert’s. “My greatest creation, the Polar-Bear-Creator!” Herbert continued. “And now, for my tester.” Herbert walked into another room and came out with a heavy concrete block. Muffled noise came out of it, but CJ couldn’t make them out. Herbert opened the side and out came Hershey8465. “Hershey!” CJ whispered to the others. Hershey screamed as she was pushed into the machine. “Let me go you beast!” She shouted. “Not a chance.” said Herbert. He was about to pull a lever when CJ shouted “Stop!!” Herbert jumped. “We meet again, Cjuniour.” He said. “It’s over Herbert! Give me Hershey!” CJ said. Hmmm… Let me think… NO!” Herbert said. Herbert pulled the lever. Two climatic things happened. First, Hershey screamed. Then, she fell out of the machine. This is what she looked like. 1. White all over 2. Hairy 3. Can’t even say it! “What am I?” Hershey said. “You are polar bear now!” Herbert said. Then, another 3 climatic things happened. First, Hershey threw Herbert against the wall. Second, CJ pushed Hershey into the machine. Third, He pulled two levers and saw the results. Hershey was back to normal. CJ grabbed his group of Mouse 99, Hershey8465, and Starwarnate. Then he ran out of the Dojo and took them all to his igloo. Everyone was finally safe.
THE END
The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear 2
(By Beef66ars, edited by Cjuniour)
Beef66ars was walking in the town one day when he got a call on his spyphone. It was G. He answered.
“Hello G what is it?”
” Well a few hours ago I sent out CJuniour on a mission to eliminate Herbert”
“And?”
” There is no sign of any of the penguins on the mission and Herbert is is still alive. I need you to find the penguins on the mission and help them complete the mission. G out”
First Beef decided to try the simplest solution. His igloo. Which actually turned out to work.When he knocked on the door someone opened it. It was not CJ.
“Who are you?” The penguin asked
“i’m Beef66ars. And you are?”
” I’m Starwarnate. One of CJ’s friends. This is Mouse, and as you know CJ, and-”
“Hershey,” Beef said ” Whats she doing here?”
” She was captured by Herbert” Starwarnate said.
” Well I’m here to help complete this mission. Let’s go everyone”
” Beef!” Hershey and CJ said at the same time.
” So your here to help complete the mission?” Hershey asked
“Yea. Lets go”
Just then they saw Herbert take off in a helicopter and fly away.
” Oh great. What now” CJ said
” We follow him” Beef said.
They heard a beeping sound.
” what’s that?” Mouse asked.
” Run!” Beef yelled
They all ran. The igloo exploded. Mouse fell.
“Mouse!” CJ ran to her and picked her up. “Shes still alive…”
Two hours later…
They were on a helicopter and Mouse was in critical condition. Finally they landed. They stepped out to find that they were surrounded by enemies. They shot the helicopter and it exploded.
”On 3 make a run for it” CJ said.
“1…″
“2…″
“3!”
They ran to the jeep that the enemies came from and they started driving away. They finally hit a highway only to find that enemies were in hot pursuit in other trucks.
“Enemy helicopter” Hershey said
It fired on them until it started to fly away
” Must’ve run out of ammo. Good enough for me…” CJ said
” Yea no kiddin- Oh Junk!( Note from Cjuniour: Starwarnate would really say that, trust me.) It’s about to take out that bridge!” Starwarnate Exclaimed.
The bridge fell. The part Hershey and Beef were on was about to collapse, so they ran to the part that was still intact.
CJ tried to contact G.
”G we are under heavy fire on the highway bridge!”
”Ok well be there in Three minutes. G out.”
“Watch out that oil tanker’s about to blow!” Starwarnate said
BOOM! The ground shook they all fell. Starwarnate was still ok. He dragged Beef a little ways out into the road and was shot in the arm. “
Beef saw Hershey on the ground dazed behind him and in the other direction CJ was on the ground and Herbert was walking towards them with two gaurds. He turned around again and Hershey slid him a pistol. Just as Herbert was about to shoot CJ, Beef shot him and his gaurds. But he missed. Just then a Helicopter arrived and G and some more PSA agents came out. G came to him and said, ” You are going to be alright my friend”
They were all airlifted back to Club Penguin. Beef saw Herbert raising his fist at them.
The End
The Revenge of Herbert 3:
The Lost Crystal
Cjuniour rattled in the Ambulance with his friends Starwarnate and Mouse 99. They had been in a speed chase. And the police were Herbert the Polar Bear and his guards. CJ saw Beef66Ars, or Beef, staring at him. “Are you ok CJ? That was a big battle.” He said. CJ sat up. Hershey8465 sat on the seat at the other side of the vehicle. They slowed to a stop, and CJ was at his igloo. They walked in and sat on a couch. CJ turned on the TV. Instead of seeing sports, he saw Herbert. “That last battle was tough.” He said. “But with the Silver Crystal, I will become invincible!” He said. “Mwuhahahaha!” Then it went to the sports. CJ turned it off. “Well, we should try to find this crystal.” CJ said. Everyone agreed. They went to the Agent HQ. “I see you made it safely.” G said. “I had an interference, and it included Herbe-“ “Herbert and he said he’s looking for the Silver Crystal. Where is it?” CJ interrupted. “It’s in a secret entrance in the boiler room, but th-“ The group left. “there are monsters and booby traps.” G continued.
CJ opened the secret door and they walked in. A Cyclops appeared. Hershey shrieked, and CJ pulled out a A-0 cracker Rifle and blasted the Cyclops. They walked through. CJ took a step on the stairs, then took a step back. A big round block fell down the stairs. “And that’s why you keep careful.” CJ said. They ran after the boulder and it splashed into a pool of water. Then, CJ jumped over the pool with the others. CJ looked up, and the ceiling appeared to be moving. “It’s gonna crash on us!!” Hershey screamed. They scrambled just before rocks fell down, blocking their exit. Something glittered on a stone pillar. “The Silver Crystal!” CJ shouted. He ran up to it and grabbed it. “Mighty Crystal of Silver, Give me your power!” CJ said. Some writing became placed on a stone. Cj read it. “The way to leave can be found with the single touch of a leaf.” CJ repeated what he just saw to the others. They were surprised. “We need to find a leaf! Search everyone!” CJ Said. They all looked around and searched. After 10 minutes of searching, CJ found the leaf. He touched it. Nothing happened. “Huh?” CJ said. HE grabbed it and pulled it. Then, one giant stone moved up. It led to some stairways. “Going up!” CJ said. They walked up the stairs and saw the Dojo. They went to the HQ and told G everything that happened. “We have one way of defeating Herbert now.” G said.
THE END
The Revenge of Herbert The Polar Bear 4
The Tale Unfolds
Cjuniour felt like action would never end. As soon as they went into the Dojo, they stumbled across a piece of paper tacked to the wall. It read:
WANTED:
HERBERT THE POLAR BEAR
FOR CRIMES AGAINST THE PEACE OF CLUB PENGUIN
REWARD: 100,000 COINS
Cjuniour didn’t know what to think of it. They had met Herbert many times. Now if they caught him, they would all get 100,000 coins equally. “Let’s see, 100,000 dived by 5 is 20,000 coins.” CJ worked out. Everyone was happy. But, then something shook the ground of the Dojo. A bulldozer wrecked the roof of the Dojo. They could see Herbert dangling from a rope. “I see you’ve found my crystal for me.” Herbert said, grabbing the Silver Crystal from Mouse’s hands. “All I need is 2 more ingredients and then I will be invincible!” Herbert laughed as he was pulled up. Something fell out of Herbert’s hands, and it fell to the ground. Herbert didn’t notice, as the Bulldozer moved away. CJ picked up the object. “Herbert’s Master Plan. Wow.” He said, reading it. It read:
COMBINE THE THREE ITEMS TOGETHER TO CREATE THE XTRA AXE, MOST POWERFUL WEAPON EVER
At the bottom of it, read the supplies. CJ started reading them until he saw some names written in bold. He read them:
Silver Crystal CHECK
Gold Emerald
Metal Axe
CJ knew there were more than what they had gotten. “We can’t let Herbert get away with this! We have to find the Gold Emerald and the Metal axe before he does!” Beef66ars said. “Good thinking, Beef. We should split up.” CJ said. “Also good thinking, CJ. Me, Starwarnate and you will go find the Gold Emerald. Hershey and Mouse should go find the Metal Axe, since Herbert isn’t looking for it.” Beef responded. “Good plan…” Hershey said. “All right, let’s do this!” Starwarnate said. They all went to G to give and get the info. “So, turns out the Gold Emerald is at the bottom of Captain Rockhopper’s Ship, and the Metal Axe somewhere frozen in the Iceberg.
That just makes it harder.” CJ said. “Which is why I why I want to add a new member to the team.” G said. A penguin came out of G’s Gadget Room. “Minigop?” CJ said in amazement. “Yep, that’s me CJ. I’m going with the girls.” Minigop said. CJ introduced Minigop to everyone. ”Now we’ll have a strong and healthy penguin to protect us!” Mouse said, smiling. All of a sudden, G’s monitors went blank. Herbert appeared on the middle one. “Haha! Now that I know your plan, I’ll send troops to go to the Iceberg and the Ship! Your dead now, Hah!” Herbert said. The screens went back to normal. The teams were decided to be Team CJ and Team Mini. Everyone agreed and left. “Good Luck, I’ll send in some other agents if you need help.” G warned. “Got it,” CJ said.
Let’s start with Team CJ. They boarded Rockhopper’s Ship. “Hmm…” CJ said. “Oh wait! G said it was at the bottom of RH’s ship! “Did he mean under it or in it?” Beef asked. “Let’s check under it first.” Starwarnate said. They got some scuba gear from the Gift Shop and went back to the Beach. “Dive, Dive!” CJ said. They jumped in and went to the bottom of RH’s Ship. “Ok, let’s look around.” CJ said. They searched for an hour until CJ said, “This isn’t working. It has to be in the ship.” They went back on shore and took off their gear. Then the went below deck into the Captain’s Quarters. “According to what G said, there should be a door on the floor. Start looking!” Beef said. They looked around until Starwarnate said, “Wait! Do you think it’s hidden in one of the digging boxes?” “It must be!” CJ said. They started digging until Beef said there was something glowing in his box. Starwarnate and CJ walked over. Well, they actually ran over. They dug quickly. CJ pulled it out. “Gold Emerald, Check.” He said. They teleported to the HQ. Then CJ gave the Emerald to G. “Keep it safe. We’re going to the Iceberg.” Beef said.
Before all this happened, Team Mini went to the Iceberg to find the Metal Axe. “He said it’s IN the iceberg.” Minigop said. “Let’s get some hard hats!” They went to the Gift shop and bought some hats and jackhammers. Then they went back to the Iceberg. “Let’s Jackhammer ‘til we just can’t Jackhammer no more!” Hershey said. After 1 hour of digging, Mouse thought she saw something. They drilled where Mouse was until they grabbed the Metal Axe. After getting out, they saw Team CJ. “We recovered the Emerald and gave it to G. I’m glad we got them before Herbert did.” CJ said. “Too late, stupid penguins!” Said a voice from behind. Herbert was there, holding G in one hand and the Gold Emerald in the other. He threw G down. “Let’s do some blackmail, shall we?” He said. He grabbed Hershey, put the Emerald in a case, and pulled out a gun. “If you want the girl, I take the Emerald and the Axe.” A guard appeared and took the Metal Axe. “If you want the items, the girl is dead.” He continued. “Don’t worry about me CJ! Just take the things!” Hershey said. “No! I won’t let you die Hersh!” CJ shouted. “It’s up to you, CJ. We won’t like either decision. I wish we had a trick up our sleeves.” Beef said. “That’s why I do!” CJ said, grabbing the gun out of Herbert’s hands. “What?!? What is this madness?!?!?” Herbert yelled. He let go of Hershey. CJ pointed the gun at Herbert. “CJ! Noo!” G shouted, but it was too late. CJ had already pulled the Trigger. BOOM! ZHZHZHZHHZHHZHZHZHZH!! “Wha?” CJ shouted. “He’s a robot!” CJ was right. Cords were sprung everywhere. “Hehehe,” Said a voice from above. “You thought I would give up THAT easily?” Herbert laughed, dangling from a rope attached to a helicopter. He grabbed the Items, only to have the case fall. “Grr. I still have more of the items than you fools!” Herbert said. The Heli flew away. “Well, time to end this mission.” CJ said.
TO BE CONTINUED…….
The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear
Written by Cjuniour
Revenge of Herbert The Polar Bear5
THE FINAL BATTLE
Written by Cjuniour
Cjuniour Knew what it meant. As he picked up the suitcase, which held the Gold Emerald, He told the others what he discovered. They would have to Fight Herbert. They would have to fight him hard. But they would need some weaponry. They teleported to the Iceberg where G was. Then, Minigop touched G. “He’s out cold!” Mini reported. “I guess he must of got beaten up before he was token here by Herbert.” CJ suggested. Minigop started slapping G on the forehead until he opened his eyes. “Uhh… Huh? Oh! CJ! Minigop! Beef66ars! I’m so glad your safe. Where’s Herbert?” G said. CJ explained the story to him. “I see!” G said. “We need some weaponry to attack Herbert.” Minigop explained. “Step in to my office. Well, my secret office.” G said. He walked to the northern end of the iceberg and put his flipper on the tip of the side. A floor like a Dance Dance Revolution pad appeared. He put his flippers in a pattern until the Iceberg turned green. Suddenly, The Iceberg became a high-tech lab. G walked over to a huge metal door. G pulled out a Key, then threw it in a nearby basket. A piece of the wall next to the metal door slid to the left and a voice activator came out. G said some code-words, then the door slid open. Military planes, Tanks, and heavy military weapons were scattered all over. “Wow!” CJ exclaimed. “I saved these weapons for an emergency. Well, this is an emergency.” G said, smiling. CJ at once jumped into a Tank. Minigop grabbed a Helicopter, and Beef66ars grabbed a 460 Rifled Bazooka. Beef jumped into Minigop’s Helicopter and Loaded his bazooka. Hershey grabbed a Tank and Mouse grabbed an A-0 Cracker Rifle. G said good-bye. He opened a huge door at the back and waved. The team rolled out, ready to fight Herbert. The readiness paid off. They were in the dojo, and Herbert was making plans. “Huh? Who? What? Oh! You pests! I am prepared for yo-“ Herbert said. He looked up at the vehicles and dropped his mouth open. “Woah. Well, this building is to explode In 1 minute. Bye forever!” Herbert said. “Yawn.” CJ said, coming from the back of the dojo. “I just defused this bomb that was to explode in 1 minute.” “NO!!!!!!!!!!!!” Herbert shouted. They all aimed their weapons, missiles, rockets, and guns at him. “Fire!!” CJ said. The weapons fired. Multiple explosions could be heard. After that, Herbert couldn’t take one more hit. “Ok guys, I didn’t really effuse the bomb. I just said that to make Herbert afraid. Now I have to defuse it.” CJ jumped out of his tank and ran. Then he said to Minigop: “Go! If I don’t make it, Tell Hershey(Here he whispered it in Minigop’s ear). Ok?” “Ok CJ” Mini responded. He smiled. Then he started running with the others. As they ran out of the building, the Dojo exploded. They turned around.
It was in flames. “NO!!! CJ!!!” Hershey said. Falling on the ground, crying. Minigop whispered in Hershey’s ear what CJ has told him to tell Hershey. She smiled, then began crying again. G came there and realized what had happened. Beef told him the details. “Luckily,” Tears welled up in G’s eyes.”I brought a lot of water. They took turns putting the pails of water on the fire until they got in. CJ laid there, next to where the bomb was. He was engulfed in fire. They threw water on him until the fire on him went out. He was burnt badly. Hershey burst into tears. Beef picked him up and pat him on the back, as if he were still alive. Minigop and Mouse did the same. Hershey could not hold back the tears. G also spotted Herbert, who was in flames as well. Hershey shot a look at Herbert, realized it was his fault CJ had died. She poured water on him, and started beating up Herbert(Who was of course dead). No one was looking at CJ now. But a miracle happened. It was so great I have to tell you. CJ opened one eye. Then he opened the next. He began breathing, but still nobody noticed this. He got up, And G turned around. His eyes bulged open, and CJ made the quiet sign. G smiled, then turned back around, still smiling. CJ quietly tip-toed around everyone, then stood behind Hershey, who had beaten up Herbert enough.
“Hey Hersh. You beat up Herbert pretty good there.” CJ said. They all turned and looked at him. Hershey looked like she was about to win a million dollars. She jumped then hugged CJ “Oh CJ! We thought you were dead!!!” Hershey screamed. “Nah, I only passed out.” CJ responded.
So ended their Mission to destroy Herbert the Polar Bear.
The End
4.The All-In-One Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear
Cjuniour (Or ‘CJ’) shook himself as Gary the Gadget Guy, or ‘G’ tapped him on the shoulder. CJ had been on Club Penguin Island for almost a year now. He had been a secret agent after 30 days living there. CJ had been waiting for so long to do something special. He couldn’t imagine this day. CJ turned and was surprised it was G. “Gary!” CJ said. “Hello Cjuniour, or can I call you CJ?” G asked. “Sure! Why are you here?” CJ responded. “There is a special mission I want to assign you to.” CJ almost exploded. “Herbert the Polar Bear’s location had been discovered. We need your help to catch him.” G continued. CJ gave a big grin. “I’d love to!” CJ said. G led him to the gadget room, and gave him some items. “It appears Herbert has captured a helpless penguin, and I believe that Hershey8465 is your friend?” CJ smiled again. “Yes she is! I’ll leave now.” CJ said. “Be careful, he has gone to a secret area in the Dojo. There is a room you must find, and you need the Area-Finder 5000 to discover it.” G said. CJ nodded and started his journey. He began a journal of his adventure. ‘Day 1: Dear Journal, I am so excited to begin this journey. I have to travel to the Mountain to get to the Dojo.’ CJ checked his buggy list, and he saw 2 friends, Starwarnate and his girlfriend, Mouse 9 9. He found both of them and asked them to join him on his mission. Both accepted and they all continued their journey. “I wonder when we will get there,” Mouse 9 9 said as he hugged CJ. When they reached the Mountain, CJ grabbed his grappling rope and threw it at the top of the mountain. It held on as they all went up. CJ grabbed the rope and put it away. Then, they went into the Dojo. No penguins were there, so he pulled out the Area-Finder 5000. He searched the room until he saw a invisible doorknob. He walked up to it and opened the door. There was a huge rock behind it. He put on the AF5000 and saw a invisible lever on the side of the wall. He pulled it and the rock went up, revealing a secret passageway. They went down and started hearing noises. They slowed to a stop, and CJ looked out the door. There was Herbert, building a strange machine. “I think it’s a big trash-can-thingy,” Whispered CJ. “It’s finished!” A voice shouted. CJ realized it as Herbert’s. “My greatest creation, the Polar-Bear-Creator!” Herbert continued. “And now, for my tester.” Herbert walked into another room and came out with a heavy concrete block. Muffled noise came out of it, but CJ couldn’t make them out. Herbert opened the side and out came Hershey8465. “Hershey!” CJ whispered to the others. Hershey screamed as she was pushed into the machine. “Let me go you beast!” She shouted. “Not a chance.” said Herbert. He was about to pull a lever when CJ shouted “Stop!!” Herbert jumped. “We meet again, Cjuniour.” He said. “It’s over Herbert! Give me Hershey!” CJ said. Hmmm… Let me think… NO!” Herbert said. Herbert pulled the lever. Two climatic things happened. First, Hershey screamed. Then, she fell out of the machine. This is what she looked like. 1. White all over 2. Hairy 3. Can’t even say it! “What am I?” Hershey said. “You are polar bear now!” Herbert said. Then, another 3 climatic things happened. First, Hershey threw Herbert against the wall. Second, CJ pushed Hershey into the machine. Third, He pulled two levers and saw the results. Hershey was back to normal. CJ grabbed his group of Mouse 99, Hershey8465, and Starwarnate. Then he ran out of the Dojo and took them all to his igloo. Everyone was finally safe.
Beef66ars was walking in the town one day when he got a call on his spyphone. It was G. He answered.
“Hello G what is it?”
” Well a few hours ago I sent out CJuniour on a mission to eliminate Herbert”
“And?”
” There is no sign of any of the penguins on the mission and Herbert is is still alive. I need you to find the penguins on the mission and help them complete the mission. G out”
First Beef decided to try the simplest solution. His igloo. Which actually turned out to work.When he knocked on the door someone opened it. It was not CJ.
“Who are you?” The penguin asked
“i’m Beef66ars. And you are?”
” I’m Starwarnate. One of CJ’s friends. This is Mouse, and as you know CJ, and-”
“Hershey,” Beef said ” Whats she doing here?”
” She was captured by Herbert” Starwarnate said.
” Well I’m here to help complete this mission. Let’s go everyone”
” Beef!” Hershey and CJ said at the same time.
” So your here to help complete the mission?” Hershey asked
“Yea. Lets go”
Just then they saw Herbert take off in a helicopter and fly away.
” Oh great. What now” CJ said
” We follow him” Beef said.
They heard a beeping sound.
” What’s that?” Mouse asked.
” Run!” Beef yelled
They all ran. The igloo exploded. Mouse fell.
“Mouse!” CJ ran to her and picked her up. “Shes still alive…”
Two hours later…
They were on a helicopter and Mouse was in critical condition. Finally they landed. They stepped out to find that they were surrounded by enemies. They shot the helicopter and it exploded.
”On 3 make a run for it” CJ said.
“1…″
“2…″
“3!”
They ran to the jeep that the enemies came from and they started driving away. They finally hit a highway only to find that enemies were in hot pursuit in other trucks.
“Enemy helicopter” Hershey said
It fired on them until it started to fly away
” Must’ve run out of ammo. Good enough for me…” CJ said
” Yea no kiddin- Oh Junk!( Note from Cjuniour: Starwarnate would really say that, trust me.) It’s about to take out that bridge!” Starwarnate Exclaimed.
The bridge fell. The part Hershey and Beef were on was about to collapse, so they ran to the part that was still intact.
CJ tried to contact G.
”G we are under heavy fire on the highway bridge!”
”Ok well be there in Three minutes. G out.”
“Watch out that oil tanker’s about to blow!” Starwarnate said
BOOM! The ground shook they all fell. Starwarnate was still ok. He dragged Beef a little ways out into the road and was shot in the arm. “
Beef saw Hershey on the ground dazed behind him and in the other direction CJ was on the ground and Herbert was walking towards them with two gaurds. He turned around again and Hershey slid him a pistol. Just as Herbert was about to shoot CJ, Beef shot him and his gaurds. But he missed. Just then a Helicopter arrived and G and some more PSA agents came out. G came to him and said, ” You are going to be alright my friend”
They were all airlifted back to Club Penguin. Beef saw Herbert raising his fist at them.
Cjuniour rattled in the Ambulance with his friends Starwarnate and Mouse 99. They had been in a speed chase. And the police were Herbert the Polar Bear and his guards. CJ saw Beef66Ars, or Beef, staring at him. “Are you ok CJ? That was a big battle.” He said. CJ sat up. Hershey8465 sat on the seat at the other side of the vehicle. They slowed to a stop, and CJ was at his igloo. They walked in and sat on a couch. CJ turned on the TV. Instead of seeing sports, he saw Herbert. “That last battle was tough.” He said. “But with the Silver Crystal, I will become invincible!” He said. “Mwuhahahaha!” Then it went to the sports. CJ turned it off. “Well, we should try to find this crystal.” CJ said. Everyone agreed. They went to the Agent HQ. “I see you made it safely.” G said. “I had an interference, and it included Herbe-“ “Herbert and he said he’s looking for the Silver Crystal. Where is it?” CJ interrupted. “It’s in a secret entrance in the boiler room, but th-“ The group left. “there are monsters and booby traps.” G continued. In the Boiler Room, CJ opened the secret door and they walked in. A Cyclops appeared. Hershey shrieked, and CJ pulled out a A-0 cracker Rifle and blasted the Cyclops. They walked through. CJ took a step on the stairs, then took a step back. A big round block fell down the stairs. “And that’s why you keep careful.” CJ said. They ran after the boulder and it splashed into a pool of water. Then, CJ jumped over the pool with the others. CJ looked up, and the ceiling appeared to be moving. “It’s gonna crash on us!!” Hershey screamed. They scrambled just before rocks fell down, blocking their exit. Something glittered on a stone pillar. “The Silver Crystal!” CJ shouted. He ran up to it and grabbed it. “Mighty Crystal of Silver, Give me your power!” CJ said. Some writing became placed on a stone. Cj read it. “The way to leave can be found with the single touch of a leaf.” CJ repeated what he just saw to the others. They were surprised. “We need to find a leaf! Search everyone!” CJ Said. They all looked around and searched. After 10 minutes of searching, CJ found the leaf. He touched it. Nothing happened. “Huh?” CJ said. HE grabbed it and pulled it. Then, one giant stone moved up. It led to some stairways. “Going up!” CJ said. They walked up the stairs and saw the Dojo. They went to the HQ and told G everything that happened. “We have one way of defeating Herbert now.” G said. Cjuniour felt like action would never end. As soon as they went into the Dojo, they stumbled across a piece of paper tacked to the wall. It read:
WANTED:
HERBERT THE POLAR BEAR
FOR CRIMES AGAINST THE PEACE OF CLUB PENGUIN
REWARD: 100,000 COINS
Cjuniour didn’t know what to think of it. They had met Herbert many times. Now if they caught him, they would all get 100,000 coins equally. “Let’s see, 100,000 dived by 5 is 20,000 coins.” CJ worked out. Everyone was happy. But, then something shook the ground of the Dojo. A bulldozer wrecked the roof of the Dojo. They could see Herbert dangling from a rope. “I see you’ve found my crystal for me.” Herbert said, grabbing the Silver Crystal from Mouse’s hands. “All I need is 2 more ingredients and then I will be invincible!” Herbert laughed as he was pulled up. Something fell out of Herbert’s hands, and it fell to the ground. Herbert didn’t notice, as the Bulldozer moved away. CJ picked up the object. “Herbert’s Master Plan. Wow.” He said, reading it. It read:
COMBINE THE THREE ITEMS TOGETHER TO CREATE THE XTRA AXE, MOST POWERFUL WEAPON EVER
At the bottom of it, read the supplies. CJ started reading them until he saw some names written in bold. He read them:
Silver Crystal CHECK
Gold Emerald
Metal Axe
CJ knew there were more than what they had gotten. “We can’t let Herbert get away with this! We have to find the Gold Emerald and the Metal axe before he does!” Beef66ars said. “Good thinking, Beef. We should split up.” CJ said. “Also good thinking, CJ. Me, Starwarnate and you will go find the Gold Emerald. Hershey and Mouse should go find the Metal Axe, since Herbert isn’t looking for it.” Beef responded. “Good plan…” Hershey said. “All right, let’s do this!” Starwarnate said. They all went to G to give and get the info. “So, turns out the Gold Emerald is at the bottom of Captain Rockhopper’s Ship, and the Metal Axe somewhere frozen in the Iceberg. “That just makes it harder.” CJ said. “Which is why I why I want to add a new member to the team.” G said. A penguin came out of G’s Gadget Room. “Minigop?” CJ said in amazement. “Yep, that’s me CJ. I’m going with the girls.” Minigop said. CJ introduced Minigop to everyone. ”Now we’ll have a strong and healthy penguin to protect us!” Mouse said, smiling. All of a sudden, G’s monitors went blank. Herbert appeared on the middle one. “Haha! Now that I know your plan, I’ll send troops to go to the Iceberg and the Ship! Your dead now, Hah!” Herbert said. The screens went back to normal. The teams were decided to be Team CJ and Team Mini. Everyone agreed and left. “Good Luck, I’ll send in some other agents if you need help.” G warned. “Got it,” CJ said. Let’s start with Team CJ. They boarded Rockhopper’s Ship. “Hmm…” CJ said. “Oh wait! G said it was at the bottom of RH’s ship! “Did he mean under it or in it?” Beef asked. “Let’s check under it first.” Starwarnate said. They got some scuba gear from the Gift Shop and went back to the Beach. “Dive, Dive!” CJ said. They jumped in and went to the bottom of RH’s Ship. “Ok, let’s look around.” CJ said. They searched for an hour until CJ said, “This isn’t working. It has to be in the ship.” They went back on shore and took off their gear. Then the went below deck into the Captain’s Quarters. “According to what G said, there should be a door on the floor. Start looking!” Beef said. They looked around until Starwarnate said, “Wait! Do you think it’s hidden in one of the digging boxes?” “It must be!” CJ said. They started digging until Beef said there was something glowing in his box. Starwarnate and CJ walked over. Well, they actually ran over. They dug quickly. CJ pulled it out. “Gold Emerald, Check.” He said. They teleported to the HQ. Then CJ gave the Emerald to G. “Keep it safe. We’re going to the Iceberg.” Beef said. Before all this happened, Team Mini went to the Iceberg to find the Metal Axe. “He said it’s IN the iceberg.” Minigop said. “Let’s get some hard hats!” They went to the Gift shop and bought some hats and jackhammers. Then they went back to the Iceberg. “Let’s Jackhammer ‘til we just can’t Jackhammer no more!” Hershey said. After 1 hour of digging, Mouse thought she saw something. They drilled where Mouse was until they grabbed the Metal Axe. After getting out, they saw Team CJ. “We recovered the Emerald and gave it to G. I’m glad we got them before Herbert did.” CJ said. “Too late, stupid penguins!” Said a voice from behind. Herbert was there, holding G in one hand and the Gold Emerald in the other. He threw G down. “Let’s do some blackmail, shall we?” He said. He grabbed Hershey, put the Emerald in a case, and pulled out a gun. “If you want the girl, I take the Emerald and the Axe.” A guard appeared and took the Metal Axe. “If you want the items, the girl is dead.” He continued. “Don’t worry about me CJ! Just take the things!” Hershey said. “No! I won’t let you die Hersh!” CJ shouted. “It’s up to you, CJ. We won’t like either decision. I wish we had a trick up our sleeves.” Beef said. “That’s why I do!” CJ said, grabbing the gun out of Herbert’s hands. “What?!? What is this madness?!?!?” Herbert yelled. He let go of Hershey. CJ pointed the gun at Herbert. “CJ! Noo!” G shouted, but it was too late. CJ had already pulled the Trigger. BOOM! ZHZHZHZHHZHHZHZHZHZH!! “Wha?” CJ shouted. “He’s a robot!” CJ was right. Cords were sprung everywhere. “Hehehe,” Said a voice from above. “You thought I would give up THAT easily?” Herbert laughed, dangling from a rope attached to a helicopter. He grabbed the Items, only to have the case fall. “Grr. I still have more of the items than you fools!” Herbert said. The Heli flew away. “Well, time to end this mission.” CJ said. Cjuniour Knew what it meant. As he picked up the suitcase, which held the Gold Emerald, He told the others what he discovered. They would have to Fight Herbert. They would have to fight him hard. But they would need some weaponry. They teleported to the Iceberg where G was. Then, Minigop touched G. “He’s out cold!” Mini reported. “I guess he must of got beaten up before he was token here by Herbert.” CJ suggested. Minigop started slapping G on the forehead until he opened his eyes. “Uhh… Huh? Oh! CJ! Minigop! Beef66ars! I’m so glad your safe. Where’s Herbert?” G said. CJ explained the story to him. “I see!” G said. “We need some weaponry to attack Herbert.” Minigop explained. “Step in to my office. Well, my secret office.” G said. He walked to the northern end of the iceberg and put his flipper on the tip of the side. A floor like a Dance Dance Revolution pad appeared. He put his flippers in a pattern until the Iceberg turned green. Suddenly, The Iceberg became a high-tech lab. G walked over to a huge metal door. G pulled out a Key, then threw it in a nearby basket. A piece of the wall next to the metal door slid to the left and a voice activator came out. G said some code-words, then the door slid open. Military planes, Tanks, and heavy military weapons were scattered all over. “Wow!” CJ exclaimed. “I saved these weapons for an emergency. Well, this is an emergency.” G said, smiling. CJ at once jumped into a Tank. Minigop grabbed a Helicopter, and Beef66ars grabbed a 460 Rifled Bazooka. Beef jumped into Minigop’s Helicopter and Loaded his bazooka. Hershey grabbed a Tank and Mouse grabbed an A-0 Cracker Rifle. G said good-bye. He opened a huge door at the back and waved. The team rolled out, ready to fight Herbert. The readiness paid off. They were in the dojo, and Herbert was making plans. “Huh? Who? What? Oh! You pests! I am prepared for yo-“ Herbert said. He looked up at the vehicles and dropped his mouth open. “Woah. Well, this building is to explode In 1 minute. Bye forever!” Herbert said. “Yawn.” CJ said, coming from the back of the dojo. “I just defused this bomb that was to explode in 1 minute.” “NO!!!!!!!!!!!!” Herbert shouted. They all aimed their weapons, missiles, rockets, and guns at him. “Fire!!” CJ said. The weapons fired. Multiple explosions could be heard. After that, Herbert couldn’t take one more hit. “Ok guys, I didn’t really effuse the bomb. I just said that to make Herbert afraid. Now I have to defuse it.” CJ jumped out of his tank and ran. Then he said to Minigop: “Go! If I don’t make it, Tell Hershey(Here he whispered it in Minigop’s ear). Ok?” “Ok CJ” Mini responded. He smiled. Then he started running with the others. As they ran out of the building, the Dojo exploded. They turned around. It was in flames. “NO!!! CJ!!!” Hershey said. Falling on the ground, crying. Minigop whispered in Hershey’s ear what CJ has told him to tell Hershey. She smiled, then began crying again. G came there and realized what had happened. Beef told him the details. “Luckily,” Tears welled up in G’s eyes.”I brought a lot of water. They took turns putting the pails of water on the fire until they got in. CJ laid there, next to where the bomb was. He was engulfed in fire. They threw water on him until the fire on him went out. He was burnt badly. Hershey burst into tears. Beef picked him up and pat him on the back, as if he were still alive. Minigop and Mouse did the same. Hershey could not hold back the tears. G also spotted Herbert, who was in flames as well. Hershey shot a look at Herbert, realized it was his fault CJ had died. She poured water on him, and started beating up Herbert(Who was of course dead). No one was looking at CJ now. But a miracle happened. It was so great I have to tell you. CJ opened one eye. Then he opened the next. He began breathing, but still nobody noticed this. He got up, And G turned around. His eyes bulged open, and CJ made the quiet sign. G smiled, then turned back around, still smiling. CJ quietly tip-toed around everyone, then stood behind Hershey, who had beaten up Herbert enough. “Hey Hersh. You beat up Herbert pretty good there.” CJ said. They all turned and looked at him. Hershey looked like she was about to win a million dollars. She jumped then hugged CJ “Oh CJ! We thought you were dead!!!” Hershey screamed. “Nah, I only passed out.” CJ responded.
So ended their Mission to destroy Herbert the Polar Bear.
The End
5. The Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear (Beef66ars version)
Ranks at the Beginning
Hershey : Corporal
CJ : Private
Bluedude: Sergeant
Knox: Private
Nature: Private
Viper: Private first class
Icecream: Private
Beef: Sergeant
G : General
Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear 1 BARSV(BeefARS Version)
Prolouge
“Good fighting Hershey,” Beef said ” We won.”
They had just finished a battle against the knights. The Nachos had won yet another battle.
” Well Beef I’m headed to the dojo for some meditation so see you later” Hershey said.
Beef was walking in the town one day when G called him on his spyphone.
” Beef we may have found Herbert. He has a friend of yours. Hershey8465″
” Hershey? How did he get his hands on her?”
” We don’t know at this time so we need you to investigate. He’s in the Dojo somewhere. You need a special gadget to find him. I’ll teleport it to you. Good luck on your mission. G out’
Then a huge metal thing that looked like a leafblower landed right in front of him.
” This big piece of junk?” He muttered to himself.
He managed to get it to the dojo.He turned it on. It made a loud sound.
” Is it supposed to do that?”
Thankfully nobody was in the dojo. Finally he found a secret passage way and walked through it. He stopped when he heard a loud thump and a yell. It was Herbert. He had Hershey with him. Herbert flicked a switch and Hershey emerged as a polar bear.
” Well Herbert It was a bad idea turning her into a bear” He said
” What the?! Beef we meet agai- OOF!”
Hershey threw him against the wall.
” Yea thats what I meant Herbert” He said
He threw Hershey back into the machine and she came out as a penguin.
” Come on Hershey! To my igloo”
” Anywhere as long as its away from that smelly furball!” Hershey said.
To be continued
Revenge of Herbert the Polar Bear 2 BARSV
Someone knocked on the door. He opened it.
” Cjuniour, PSA agent.” He said
” Hi. What is your business here. And your rank?” Beef asked
” We are here to assist you on your mission to eliminate Herbert. My rank is Admiral” He said.
Beef noticed that there were other PSA agents behind him. There was Icecream, Bluedude ( His friend not Hersheys cousin), Vipermaster,Nature, and Knox. He welcomed them in. They all exchanged greetings until Icecream said ” we should get going ”
” He is right ” Beef said
They left at just the right time becuase they saw Herbert fly away in a helicopter.
” Come on we have to follow him” Bluedude said.
A little while later they were landing on a distant island in a helicopter only to find themselves surrounded by a bunch of Herberts men.
” Get in the jeep!! Hurry! ” Beef said.
They all got into the jeep and started driving. They saw a helicopter destroy a bridge up ahead.
” STOP THE TRUCK!!’ Viper yelled.
It was too late. They made it but the truck didn’t. Beef was on a safe part of the bridge. Knox was climbing to the safe part when he noticed Nature had fallen with the truck.
” Nature!! NO! ” Knox yelled
” Hurry up Knox! Forget about him!” Beef said.
Beef contacted PSA headquarters.
” This is Aplha six we need air support NOW!! Grid square 2385. Fire mission danger close! Marking target with orange smoke!” He said.
He threw the canister of colored smoke at the enemy. Soon after jet planes arrived and bombed the enemy. Along with them came helicopters that airlifted them back to Club Penguin.
To be continued
Revenge of Herbert 3 BARSV
Beef woke up in the helicopter. CJ looked at him.
” Are you ok? We got beat pretty hard back there”
” Yea” Beef said.
The helicopter finally landed. They got out and walked to Beef’s igloo and sat down. When Beef turned on the TV something weird happened. It kept flipping through channels and this is what it turned out to say.
First a food commercial. “Beef-”
Then Starwars ” Be careful my friend-”
Then some kids show ” Herbert-”
Then the News ” Is still on the loose-”
Then Dora ” Can you find the-”
And finally a show about minerals ” Crystal”
The TV turned off. He tried to turn it back on but it didn’t work.
” Now that was creepy” Viper said.
” Well it has to mean something” Icecream said.
” We have to find some sort of crystal. We should contact G.” Hershey said
” Ok I will” Beef said ” G we are looking for a crystal somewhere. Can you help us?”
” I know where it is. There is a secret entrance in the boiler room. You’ll have to use the AF500 again. G out”
when he got to the boiler room he turned on the AF500.
He located the secret passage.
“lets go guys” Beef said.
they followed the passage to a huge cavern. He saw the crystal. Suddenly a ninja with a sword jumped out of nowhere. He started doing tricks with his sword.
” This should be interesting” CJ said.
Beef just pulled out a gun and shot him.
” real interesting” Knox said
Beef grabbed the crystal. When he did that the place started to fall apart.
” TAKE COVER!” Beef shouted.
A rock hit him in the head.
Revenge Of Herbert the Polar Bear 4
(Note from Cjuniour: This is the final book for BARSV)
In his dream Nature came to him.
” Nature? Is that you?” Beef asked
” Yes it is. I come to inform you that there is a traitor that will soon join your group”Nature said
” Who? When?”
Nature vanished. He woke up to see Hershey looking at him.
” Whew. We thought we lost you there” She said.
He decided not to tell them about the traitor yet in case it was a normal dream that didn’t mean anything.
” Lets report to HQ” Bluedude said
When they got to HQ they told G what happened.
” I have just what you need.” G said.
He walked over to a corner and tapped on the wall. It dissappeared and behind it there were rows and rows of Abrams tanks, Blackhawk helicopters, and f-22 jets. There was an armory soon. G walked over to it and introduced a penguin named Integerty.
” I will be joining you today in your battle” He said.
Before they knew it they were on their way to the dojo in a tank along with the PSA army. When they got there they found Herbert and his army waiting for them.
” Someone planted a charge on the tank! Get out now!” CJ yelled
They managed to escape the tank before it blew up. They started battling.
Icecream was shot in the leg.
” Get him in the helicopter now!!” Bluedude yelled.
Viper carried him in.
” We won’t last much longer out here.” Hershey said.
” I’ll plant charges on the main supports of the building. Get everyone in the helicopter Bluedude.” Beef said
” No! We won’t leave you Beef” Knox said.
” Get in the helicopter Private!” Bluedude said
They went to the helicopter.
” Oh, and Bluedude. Tell Hershey that”- BOOM-” And that I”- BANG – Beef said.
” Ok. I never let you down and I never will. It’s been nice serving with you Beef” Bluedude said.
She saw the explosion.
” Why!?” She said half to herself.
” Calm down Hershey” Viper said ” I didn’t want him to die either”
” Hershey come here” Bluedude said.
She walked over to him.
” What is it?” She asked.
” Beef told me to tell you that there is a traitor here. And he also promoted you to Sergeant” He said. ” ok lets land and inspect the damage”
When they landed she walked over to Beef and couldn’t bear to look at him. She then walked over to Herbert and looked at his body with angry eyes. She heard a rifle click behind her. It was Integerty. The traitor.
When Beef woke up he looked around and remembered where he was.
” Traitor”
The word echoed in his mind.
” Please! No!” he heard Hershey yell.
He still had his gun. He pulled it out and shot him. Nobody knew wether to look at Integerty or Beef.
” Beef your alive! You saved me!” Hershey exclaimed. ” But wait. You promoted me to Sergeant. Thats your rank.”
” We can fix that….. Lieutenant Beef” G said.
” Well Beef. You earned a lot today. The honor of killing Herbert, a new rank, and a reputation for miracles” Viper said.
Everyone laughed.
” Lets go home guys”
“Good Idea. And While we’re there, let’s have pizza to celebrate!” Cjuniour Said.
With that ended their quest to destroy Herbert.
The End
Epilogue
That night the ghost of Nature appeared.
” Beware. A new more powerful danger is coming soon.”
Ranks at the End
Hershey: Sergeant
Cj: Corporal
Viper: Private first class
Knox: Private
Icecream: Private
Nature: X
Integerty: ??????
Bluedude: Sergeant
Beef : Lieutenant
G: General
A. Character Descriptions
Beef66ars: The main character of this series, he knows that everything has a reason for happening. sometimes in his dreams, he sees the near future.He is best at being stealthy, but can battle in large fights too.
Cjunior: AKA Cj he will fight until the end to protect his squad, especially Hershey. By now his rank should be at least Sergeant but G refused to promote him for no real reason. Nevertheless, He is still calm, and charming. He, as well as everyone else, Notice that G has been acting strange lately.
Hershey8456: She always obeys orders including the battle of Herbert, she went to the helicopter without hesitation, but still wished Beef hadn’t destroyed the dojo as well as himself. Or so they thought.
Bluedude: Great friends with Beef, he fights with him all the time. He truly is a great penguin. He has had a hard past. When he was a child his igloo was destroyed by a mystyrious polar bear. He lost his parents, but his brother and sister lived. He hasn’t seen them since.
Nature: He died shortly after joining Beef’s squad, but he still keeps in touch with them, telling them dangers of the future.
Viper: Beef and her met at a fashion show. After that they lost touch for a long period of time. They met again When Cj appeared at Beefs door. She is known to be funny and for saving Icecream at the battle of Herbert.
Icecream: Not much is known about him. Only that he is a fierce fighter.
(Note From Cjuniour: To be updated soon)
6. Credits!
All right, before I start anything, I’d like to give a big warm thank-you to Beef66ars, who helped me write most of the books and even wrote RHPB 2. Thanks a lot for going with me to make one of the most climatic stories ever. Thanks for giving me all the help and ideas to create an awesome story of some friends battling an evil genuis. Thanks for everything Beef66ars.
The Authors, Editors, and Helpers
Story Number Writer Editor Helper
1 Cjuniour
2 Beef66ars Cjuniour
3 Cjuniour Beef66ars
4 Cjuniour Beef66ars
5 Cjuniour Beef66ars
Version 2:
1 Beef66ars Cjuniour
2 Beef66ars
3 Beef66ars
The Cast
Cjuniour
Hershey8465
Beef66ars
Starwarnate
Mouse 9 9
Minigop
Fort57
Gary the Gadget Guy
The Cast v.2
Beef66ars
Hershey8465
Cjuniour
Knox
Bluedude
Nature
Viper
Icecream865
Gary The Gadget Guy
Herbert the Polar Bear
Well, that sums up the credits.

Well the RHPB series is over. I find a few parts may be a little…….. Humiliating to Hershey in part 5. Other than that, its pretty good. I have an idea. Its an alternate version of RHPB series in Beef66ars’ point of view written by Beef66ars (obviously). I’ll start working on it now.
Hmmm. I wouldnt really consider myself a “dude”. But I really can’t believe how you guessed the stealthy thing. I love to be stealthy, sneak around, and best of all snipe people. I have dead eye accuracy.
You could never know.
Cj
Oh, and I gtg. I’ll put up your story later..
why not add me to your version of the series, beef?
Ok I will find a place to put you in.
I’ll start working on part 2 now
Part 2’s up Beef. Looks short, but good.
Cj
LOL. I noticed you changed your rank to admiral. I kind of had something planned. so could you keep yourself as a private?Its just for now. By the way, here are the ranks of the characters in the beginning.
Hershey : Corporal
CJ : Private
Bluedude: Sergeant
Knox: Private
Nature: Private
Viper: Private first class
Icecream: Private
Beef: Sergeant
G : General
I wont post the ranks at the end of the series yet. I will do that once I’m done. I will start working on part 3 now.
CJ:
Hm… I guess that’s ok. As long as you make it good.
Now I will start part 4. I am going to go right to the final battle ok? So part 4 will be the last one.
Ook. Waiting for you, Beef.
Cj
ARG!! I copied part 4 and pasted it on my comment and it came up as part 3! Now I have to write it again!
And by the way, You will gain ranks in the other stories. I am going to make a new series that takes place after this.
Oh and heres a preview of my next series.
He introduced himself to his new men
” I’m Beef, Rule #1 Youre no good to me dead Rule #2 Uhhh what is it again? Nevermind”
He walked away.
” What kind of pep talk was that?” Taylor asked.
Beef, Please post the story in the Stories section.
…
Cj
Oh and good job with number 4.
Knox: Strong and ferocious, He cares for all of his squadmates. He prefers to work with a partner when the squad splits up.
Characters from new series.
Taylor: She is Bluedudes long lost sister. She likes to be funny and keep people positive because she thinks thats a good way to make it through hard times
Cold icee: They don’t call her cold for nothing. When a squadmate is injured or killed, she seeks revenge. Her and Beef met in a snowball fight. They fought together as blue and won/
Icecube: He used to be Beefs rival, but he joined up with him. He is also Bluedudes brother. He developed a good relasionship with G.
I think thats all
mK1auz Thanks for good post